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Let's kick this around good and proper before any unded show. Once that happens I've ideas for several chapters without the dynamic duo that should run between 40k-100k, all told. Very ambitious, but fun.

The real Dave is a busy little bee, imho. he seems capable of anything. He's like a journo with ADD, and will believe anything contrary to popular opinion. There's got to be some regular person out there that once offended Pike-ola, inspiring his flat-out full-on lunacy. I must explore this notion... Remember when, Dave Pike, have a tissue for your eyes....

Derek needs a touch of lunacy this time around, too. Eating chocolate out of an old loin cloth. Blecch.

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I think my writing abilities have improved greatly from where I was in TIL 4, so I have no issue aiming high, max of a 100k, min of 40k words. Takes me about an hour to get 1000 words written. My last post was so big, I had to split it. I feel comfortable writing which is the most important thing, it comes natural to me with these characters.
As said before though, the previous TIL stories had faults; many. For example, it seemed that all to often they were confined to a particular place, which then made writing difficult. We've got to keep it flowing, keeping the story moving about and adding new characters.
This for a final story will be the best. I'm sure of it. I'm intrigued by your Dave idea by the way, it could work out brilliantly. Who would offend Dave? I wonder.
Now gonna write a brief 'news report' for something in the story. An idea I've just had.

I suppose this is TALK TIL THREAD, mike.

Happy writing and relax!
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quote:

"Did you not daydream about making him 'tired like he had felled great trees'?"

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This whole thing is getting very homo-erotic. I must inform you, that despite my posts being 10 rated gay on the scale of gayness, I am not a homosexual. I must bring in a wife for Dave or something, to balance this out. emoticon

Your post was both odd and hilarious. I see interesting things stemming from this. Can't wait to crack on with the next post.

BTW: I'm not against posting whenever you feel the need, Mike. It shouldn't be set in stone that you post this day and this day only. I suppose it's good to keep to a set day, but as said, if you feel the need to add more whenever, simply go for it. Granted, I've posted a lot but this has merely been so we don't struggle along, early on. Maximum posts from me is going to be 2 per week. Next post from me coming on Saturday or Sunday.

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Next post coming tomorrow. Bit busy. Its half complete and Calpurnea & Ethelred are extremely difficult to work with. emoticon

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Main Dave post coming later in the week, after your next post.

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Sorry for the brief interlude. I took a mental holiday, but now I'm back and thinking of the great TIL5....

I apologize for the sexualizing. My editorial standard is usually just amusement.... Fifty-one shades of Dave Pike, fingerpainted....

Dr. Bloodsteve RYF has returned! Excellent! Will post some story, some withing continuity, some without, in two-three days.
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Be in no rush, Michael. That was one of the problems with the original TIL stories. We were so keen to post that interest and ideas soon dried up. We don't need that to happen this time. I have some ideas popping up in my head at the [sign in to see URL] of which is to get the old Derek back to his spirit communication.

Watch this space.

Just bare in mind, that you can take this anywhere. Bring in different characters, other narratives etc.. Just go for it.

Hope all in well in Michael world.

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Got another post coming tomorrow. It involves you and the preacher... I continue to humiliate you in fiction and imagination emoticon

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Where are you Mike? You haven't lost interest already? emoticon

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I swear I will kill Derek off if you do not post here, Mike! emoticon

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